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Thursday 2 November 2017

Fox’’the sequel


Dog had woken up lonely, thinking his joyful life had ended. It was like someone erased all the good thoughts in his mind and replaced them with bad.He was feeling miserable like a kid getting his Mother taken away from him.


On the other hand Magpie was hoping dog would forgive him.Magpie strides out to find dog,with all the stuff in the way stopping her.


Fox was feeling happy he wanted more he wanted to separate them for life.So Fox went searching for Magpie through the trees,swamps,forests,bush and habitats.


Finally fox and magpie met again. “ Hop on my back and i will take you to dog to be joyful once again’’ Fox said. So on jumped Magpie and Fox ran straight to dog.

They got there and Dog didn’t know what to say, suddenly Fox flicked Magpie off his back and opened his mouth ready to eat magpie.But Dog kicked Fox in the face Magpie ran away and it was all up to fox to save the day Dog gave Fox one kick to the stomach and bit his tail. After that fox ran away. Magpie shouted “I will be your missing eye you will be my burnt wing’’!

3 comments:

  1. i like how you showed your proper writing

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  2. were magpie and dog friends again

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  3. maybe next time you could take away the picture

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